All Comments on 'not by the moon'

Of all your submissions on these 2 pages, I like this one best. I resonates with me, and isn't that what poetry is supposed to do?

Thanks as

this would be a masterpiece for many poets. for you, eh. lol It's not bad, though. "Our stars are for wishing not for counting" cute line. Stop writing cute!

yea fly, I know that line sucks, I wanted to say something like

qualitative not quantative but einstein whacked me with his violin stick and he made me do it, I swear. and he is not sorry about it either.

thanks for the comments, love poetry is not easy for me.

thanks for being kind :)

That is great, 'the moon follows us' it conveys such a powerful bond and emotion. Thanks

Laid out on the page a in great fashion. sand

The last strophe is excellent and creative. Lines like "our heavens are immeasurable" had me cringing, though! I think you manage to stay on the upside of syrupy, but be careful!

Fly

Beautiful- both the poem and the emotion it expresses.