All Comments on 'Not Strong Enough'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
RHYMERS TO CHEATEE's

who lets it continue. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wheels within wheels

DC:

Past= hurt? Rejection?

Present= Fear? Uncertainty?

Future=?

Wheels within wheels and so it goes, or does it?

Thank You. Ronnie W.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sweet

Wanting something more,

they both refused to see,

what lay before the others,

each bound by destiny.

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I love these lines. Just wistfull and sad.

I feel this all the way through.

Huggs to ya my friend and

More Please ~

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

A bit lighter here,

a message of wistful hope;

Deanna, you're evolving quite nicely.

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