All Comments on 'Nothing is Real'

Introspection... I loved this, D. How many times have we all been there, feeling alone and lost? Hope shines between your lines, or am I reading it too close? What is reality, anyway, but an illusion we create for ourselves? Well done! ~Minx

some really good possibilities in this poem, but the way it's delivered just makes it fall short.

The punctuation in the third line of each strophe forces a pause that detracts, and you're inconsistent in the last lines as well.

I think with a little editing/rework this could be a much stronger poem.

Does anyone actually

have a real answer for that?

I havent found one yet!

Lovely poem,

really worked for me.

Well done,

Thanks.

~ J

questions posed throughout. We never really can tell what is real and what is deceiving.