All Comments on 'Oasis'

story. Conveys strength and determination as well as hope. Thanks.

This is a poem with great promise.

The poet creates some excellent images and writes some fine stanzas,

but the poem is uneven and has some parts that weaken the flow and/or the image quality.

"to quench desert thirst in ancient rains" is a good image and deserves something stronger than what follows.

Keep writing