All Comments on 'ocher'

of this poem I really like. :)

This is good:

"As real as your sense of poetic justice

Lingering in the shambles of our clothing."

You have a growler here my friend.

Love the erotic feel and deliverance.

Hot write that leaves one feeling unfinished

and needy. A very good thing in a poem me thinks ~

Great flow with sizzling imagery, just love

the picture you paint with each "stick to ya" stroke ~

Hot Hot Hot ~!!!