All Comments on 'Odalisque'

Very Good. Why can't all erotic poetry be this well crafted?

someone to dream of me this way one day...

Though I would have liked to have seen it more visually as what I think of as a poem, the words were powerful and engaging...not to mention hot. I can feel you savoring each word in your mouth before setting it out there for me to see. I love that.

Really lovely piece invoking yearning memory.