All Comments on 'Ode To The Broken Hearted Submissiv'

by Michael10166

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Welcome to Lit with this poem of dark despair, as you portray the abandonment of all hope by a submissive. BTW, I believe you meant to say envelop {envelope is a thing in which you place letters}.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
All hope..

is gone. Such a sad ending.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
gone

Seeking refuge ~ in the Eternal Sea ~ Life slips away.

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