All Comments on 'On the Back of a '57 Indian'

by jd4george

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BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
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They say our dreams never die- that age is only a number. It's not really true, tho, is it? Thank you, jd!

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
ya know...

I think I saw that warrior in a few of my dreams lately, its never too late, not really, you should pull that Indian outta the garage and taker for a long haul :)

MerrymakerMerrymakerover 19 years ago
Great ride

I really enjoyed the spirit in this, could hear the tease of horsepower unleashed...nicely done.

~Merry

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
There is no doubt

in my mind that the painted warrior lives on. The manner of his manifestation may have changed, but the big-ass bike is no more than a tool. Go for it, JD4G!

PatCarringtonPatCarringtonover 19 years ago
great reading.

a cornicopia of memory and good things / i prefer your linear poetry when it is punctuated / that is personal taste, but there is no doubt where the reader should go, and how / wonderful poetry /

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Sounds like

the journey you took instead was just as interesting.

Great work .

The night sky is full of my " what if's" too

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