All Comments on 'On the Breath of a Sigh'

beautiful, beautiful phrases trickling through this - and it is a sigh of a poem, its subject timeless.

An ageless song recited by a lonely ocean, the tide carries murmurs of life;

voices in the background, hitting the sand in sad, minor keys.

For the sea, there is only the river.

too much to say about the loveliness this encompasses, for now at least - it's left its mood, dreamy, gentled...

it probably has faults, but - for now - they don't feel as if they matter :)

thank you very much. as a newbie I am relieved to find the non erotic section, though I believe that nearly anything can be erotic if spoken about in the right tone. I am happy that you enjoyed this

The title is rather clichéd but for a lovely poem like that your are forgiven :) thank you for the read

work on some things that are sort of cliched

An ageless song

Time plays a memory

Read some poetry, to get a feel for stucture.

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lol, I never claimed to be anything but a hack. thanks for your comments

You can write but you need to work on your technical skills. There's some great lines there.

when I see that many words on a line I usually will not even read the poem, but I saw the recommend and decided to try. They are correct. I learned. Listen to the comments--these poets know what they speak of.