by Cerriwiden
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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Talk about setting the stakes high! I'd be surprised if any better poem comes out of the challenge. Wonderful you two!
and with your words I hear. Finally some poetry here... finally...
jim : )
Flawless:
"Who listens here where once
dandelion seeds rose to sky?
Now excommunicated from sun,
ghost flowers lie,
paved beneath intentions."
I cannot tell who wrote what,
but, this one line does not fit
"Olympus is shrouded in centuries."
Would have picked something closer to the time, place, implied.