All Comments on 'Once though of as cotton'

but it could be a 5 easily. Very good work. You need to take the time to edit (typo in title) and trim some excess words.

this is clearly the best and most polished of the 5 poems you offered today. There is a lot to consider here, and some of the phrasing here, and also in "Master and his Roaches" is first-rate. Very much look forward to reading more of your work.