All Comments on 'One last kiss'

doesn't just tell sadness--it shows it. There are some spots that need editing for grammar and punctuation, but the content is very good.

moving poem~

gripping, moving and endearing~

I didn't get much past the part where the roast tastes different and knew what was going on. You did a great job showing how hard it is to lose someone so important to a family. *hugs*

I feel like an idiot as I write this with tears streaming down my cheeks. A very moving poem that pulled my biggest heart string. I am a parent so this poem really hit hard. Wonderfully written.

Gracious how my heart cries for your loss.

You painted the most loving, caring picture.

Just a heartbreaking look loss ...

Huggs my friend.

Hmm, ya know it helps a lil

if the hair is slightly wet when braiding.

Just a tip that works for me ... sometimes, lol.

More Please ~

I really can feel the emotion in this poem so it is from this perspective that I gave it a 5*

I don't know enough to analyse it, but it tugs at my heart strings, somebody trying so hard to bring up a daughter, and every day reminded of the mother that was lost. The love that has not diminished even a fraction from the moment that she died. If only she could see, the mother would be so proud.

There I did cry

for a life well lived. TK U MLJ LV NV