All Comments on 'Open Your Eyes'

A bit of Dada froma bloke called Dada has to score 5

Love it.

so simple yet sez so much,

this really works,

loved it!

Thanks.

~ J

where your imagination will take you.

What did the sign say?

Bill, welcome back

too cute and too you BD!

good one!

Kisses,

T

be the same without you!

TESTDRIVE !!! lol...

-sGp-

Great.Self referential poem creates imagenry small semi cirdular motion which starts at the first line (I took) then lands two lines later right at the lap of the reader (here).I love those poems which force you to read them again, teasing you in their simplicity. If it's so simple - do the same!