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by Selena_Kitt

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flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Very nice

Loved the metaphors regarding navigation. I don't fully understand the last stanza, but the final line is wonderful.

jd4georgejd4georgealmost 20 years ago
You know your craft!

I loved the line "this hunger for thick honey turning black". Though tempted, I know better than to be a thief! (LOL) I intend to watch for your name.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
oh yes!

this is a great poem. wonderful metaphors and vivid images. nice work!

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Some great

images.

Nice work

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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