All Comments on 'Opening Night'

Beautifully written! This is so good on many levels. And I LOVE Grannie! Flawless phrasing:

and the evening dragged on

glacier river slow

not without it's moments

toes rubbed together

under the table

mouthed loveyous

behind napkins

and perfectly paced.

the " loveyou behind nipkins" was beautiful.

sweet and tender and funny

and brings me back to those footsie days

Thank you

It was a simply sweet poem except the middle part from "no one noticed" to "one to remember". That part made me stumble and I didn't think I'd get back upright, but you took me back to the poem I was loving right after that and I felt it again.

well-conceived and written. Great reading, as always from you.

i loved the way it flowed off my tongue, and you painted the evening so wonderfully. great piece of work!

and well written.