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by laelia
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f-cynyrover 18 years agodelicate.
very delicate measured controlled poem . quite good, very strong images. nicely done. i hope to read more by you.
sackover 18 years agoquite beautiful.....
the best poem I have read today, a perfect little miniature....
Anonymousover 18 years ago•) I got inkspots on my fingers!!!
folded up
inside your folds
a cunning mystery awaits
I await with baited breathe
the eclectic electric moment
when pen in hand descends
decides to caress creases
onto a blank recieving page
Anonymousover 18 years agoit is
so wonderful to see you writing like this, I love all of your words~
annaswirls
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