All Comments on 'Out of Love'

There were images throughout that tore at the heartstrings. Among them this nice passage:

"his blackmail lines repeated every night...

while wishes are trapped inside

and my tearducts are clogged

from the residue of false smiles and false dreams."

Thank you for the read.

is mentioned on the new poems thread.

Thanks for sharing.

*no thermometer

with this poem! A frank and largely unsentimental look at the little steps that lead us to big trouble. Well done, DS.

is tangible.

Thank you for sharing