All Comments on 'P*e*r*?'

You wrote that in 30 minutes? In a contest/challenge? Where?

I really liked the way it made me feel, it had your zen touch sprinkled all over it turo! Great work.

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I came and read your poem ART (Thanks) I don't want you to be upset but the title really isn't appropriate for your poem. Your humor mixed with your wisdom. In this case You really should rename this very good poem with a different title and save that title for more light hearted poem:)

The poem itself is great:)

I couldn't write poetry like that in 30 years. :D

Letter for this poem is M:

mezmerizing

marvelous

magnetic

mashed

moments

moxie

miffed

musical

mental

Metaphysical! Ty you Art for the creative unique expresses of your Literal world..

Du!~

This poem really has some heart in it. You can have all the technical shit right, and still not be saying much of anything. This has (to me) some boo-boo's in it, but it's deep, meaningful and sincere. Good job, Arturo.

Such a great read.

T*a*k

*o*

F*r

*h*

J*u*n*y

Still,

A real shoot 'em up...