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UnseenChagrinUnseenChagrinalmost 20 years ago
I feel like Picasso

I love your play on words. You are quite talented!

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
An interesting play on the marble and granite

in this interesting poem. The rhyme in the last stanza felt a bit forced, but otherwise this was very good.

jim : )

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
granted

"Turquoise garnish on olive skin"

This is an interesting and original line!

"by marble taken for granite"

I like this. Very clever.

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