All Comments on 'Paradise Regained'

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
NATURE PAINTS THE COLORS OF THE UNIVERSE

the playas are a result of lunar activity, TK U MLJ LV NV

DesejoDesejoalmost 12 years ago

I love what you have done with the line breaks in this poem - the structure grabbed my attention. The imagery kept it. Well done.

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