All Comments on 'Parting Embrace'

Oh, to be held in those warm, safe arms forever....

Lovely poem...you brought a smile to my face.

Honey

For a quickie that rocked!!!

that yearning, grasping need so well. Beautifully protrayed, Imp. Well done.

with a marvelous economy of line few can imitate. Excellent!!

i wish i didn't know just how this felt. yearning...

you captured that feeling so very well. continue please.

*hugs*

v~

for saturday 27 2004

thanks for the journey~

Impressively witty and cute~

Crapola

What in this poem are you trying to say? It says it's under erotic poetry but there's nothing that draws the reader in. No emotion. "One thousand one.....One thousand two" made me feel like a 1st grader trying to understand a children's story/poem??

I love the way it flows, the control. You can practically feel the time slow down, you can sense each heartbeat. A remarkable feat for such a contained poem.

The play of words in the last verse of the last stanza is perfect.

is always the hardest part. But oh, so necassary.

and I love it. I felt this poem. What a wonderful job you did with it.

I have always been told..

Good things come to those who wait..

Well woohoooo..

Loved this poem I say~~!!

The whole set-up just makes ya take your slow..sweet time..

Breathing it in an tasting every drop of the poem.

Just a hot lil poem.

More I say~~!!! *Big Smiles*

great crapola. I think I read it before, but I must have forgotten to post...LOL.

Keep up with the crapola, it works.

... right there *points at pussy*. Um, no! Scrap that! I meant *points at heart*. ;)

Well done, Imp! Very concise and powerful poem.

Lou

xxx

Oh, I totally know that hesitant, hopeful, expectant yearning! "An excuse to touch ~ too brief to savor..." Splendidly done! Thank you. LJ

The elasticity of time divided by the want of flesh equals this poem.

ty,bd

made me feel like a 1st grader trying to understand a children's story/poem??

Anonymous, you still have delusions of granduer, it will be years before you get to a 1st grade level of reading. Since this poem is well above a 1st grade level of reading of course you didn't understand it.