All Comments on 'parts of speech'

I really enjoyed reading this poem, parts of it were better than others, this is my favorite though..

your swallow tail skirt,

the slim slit I requested waves free

in the wind

down your left outer

silver stocking thigh

black against gray sky

silver stocking thigh, black against gray sky....yeah, thats really good :)

Seldom have I read a poem with such a balance between the narrative and the elaborately precise. I't was pure delight to read.

I keep coming back to this poem. Its as if I think maybe she will be found, and in a way she is. Every pass it is stronger, more clear, more familiar, wonderful, Mr. Walker, you sure know how to write a poem.