- Erotic Poetry
- Passionflower
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Lying silently, I hear your every word
And taste the magic of your thought...
You vivify my innermost silent world
Immersed within each emotion.
Your presence courses through my veins;
Fears are set free to blowing winds –
Like a flurry of butterfly wings –
And intimacy imbues the moment.
As the sweet smell of budding blooms,
It flows like a wave of love
Over and around our snaking forms,
Where the scent of lovers’ breath
Becomes the heat of entwined limbs,
Like tendrils of the passionflower
On a humid tropical day.
We will eventually lay spooned
Beneath the casting of a moon night,
Listening to cool breeze’s dulcet tones –
Amorous and romantic words, –
Libidinally enticing our burning desires!
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- COMMENTS
esotericimpover 9 years agoAuthorthat you enjoyed the poem :) I thank and respect your comment.
Do you feel there may be a more appropriate word that could work, instead of "vivify" (enliven, interesting?) That would not jar the flow! I am very receptive to feedback. Again, thank you.
todski28over 9 years agoEnjoyed this a lot. However I think the word vivify is a whole mouthful of syllables th at jar in its current spot, it interrupts your flow.
