All Comments on 'Passionflower'

Enjoyed this a lot. However I think the word vivify is a whole mouthful of syllables th at jar in its current spot, it interrupts your flow.

that you enjoyed the poem :) I thank and respect your comment.

Do you feel there may be a more appropriate word that could work, instead of "vivify" (enliven, interesting?) That would not jar the flow! I am very receptive to feedback. Again, thank you.