Pelican Bay

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Pelican bay

They circle for hours over the cove
around and around they go

Large white birds with black tipped wings
pelicans that gather to join the soaring

Criss crossing and lazy crazy eights
fixed winged kites in uniformed pace

Like a patch of snow along the shore
they land in groups, tired or bored

Fixed wing glides just above the water
in formation one behind another

I enjoy watching these birds every day
pelicans that live around Pelican Bay

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
From Under the Bridge

Yawn

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Dreamy ~

My fav. of yours Art ...

I love your imagery. The slow, steady flow that just let's us live right there in that moment, mesmerized by your winged friends there at Pelican Bay ... So when can we all visit, sounds like my kinda place for a relaxing vacation ... *grins ...

Love it ~!!

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
it leaves one.......

engrossed in the imagery......great piece......don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I really enjoyed this

Good write.

Curiouswife

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
you must be refering

to the white pelican...I have seen them here in Florida as well ...beautiful birds...

nice tribute...blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Ummm, is this the part of

Pelican Bay that is "designed to house the state's most serious criminal offenders in a secure, safe and disciplined institutional setting".

Is this poem more subtle than what the comments indicate... is this a prisoner looking out the window at "Pelican Bay"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very nice

I don't read much poetry because I don't really understand it, that was beautiful...

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Flying

Loved it, especially 'Criss crossing and lazy crazy eights'

Very nice.

ty,bd

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Very nicely done, Art. Your painting always puts me in a nature mood.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
nice!

another good one Buddy!

keep them coming!

kisses Arty!

T