by My Erotic Tail
Whoa, what an intensely vivid scene you captured, I heard the smack!!
The title drew me in,I'm glad it did,Thanks
Every word inspires an erotic vision of a burning passion that would leave the sheets in cinders, if not for sweat and orgasmic release! Amazing job! Well-Done~! :) ~Rain
Wow is the word. This was a hot, fast, ride. Great imagery and the flow..well it slid right off the page..Sizzles I say~~!!!