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People in Books

byCleardaynow©

I envy people in books.
Even uncertainties
are precise,
shaped by words
in black and white

Not so for me.
My thoughts, my words impure.
An animal caged by barriers unseen,
I remain confused, enraged, unclean.

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by Oldbear6310/23/13

Yep - Tod is right.

Cleardaynow - I wish more folks would comment on their work - very interesting. I guess when we put stuff out there it becomes open to so many different perceptions - one of the things that make this somore...

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by todski2810/23/13

but

don't both interpretations say almost the exact same thing :-p

I like this by the way 5-ed

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by Cleardaynow10/23/13

Interpretation

I agree with Oldbear63’s interpretation rather than the interpretation in my own last comment.

I seem to have wandered off the actual poem into territory of my own – people commenting seem to do thatmore...

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by Ashesh910/22/13
by Oldbear6310/22/13

Okay, I was perfectly happy

with my interpretation - that people in books are not beset by the complexity of real life, no matter how good the author. I'm going with that!

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