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lipsticksunset1984lipsticksunset1984almost 20 years ago
I like....

...the raw feel, and especially like the last 3 lines.

don't talk

don't kiss me.

just do it again.

There is a whole lot there, much more than meets the eye. The better the lead-in, the stronger those lines would become!

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
a slutty poem

that doesn't say, "Hey, I'm just another cliche fuck poem."

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