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Man RayMan Rayalmost 19 years ago
Nice...

Nice imagery, well done!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
enchanting

riddled with the spice of your write, I enjoyed your tail

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
Passion

the way you describe it leaves me in awe of you:

"Hot heavenly haven, hatches.

Hills he climbs. My valleys he parts. Pathways open

to him. Pulsating pulp trickles, as he tickles my fancy."

My most favorite part.

~Honey

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