All Comments on 'Phantom Surrender'

Some clever word play and wonderful images, WV! Leaves me panting for more!

Fly

I've been looking for this level of heat all morning. Steamy, seductive and well written. Thanks!

~Syn

and i wonder why......*LOL*......absolutely a terrific write.

wow a witty word wizard poem~

bows humble (~_~) excellent erotic poetry

Highly erotic. I'd bow down and kiss your toes right here, but all I would be tasting is my keyboard and it would ruin the fantasy ;)

Thank you, Vix.

and seductive.

wow, nice imagery...very hot.

Well, if I didn't know better....*wink*

This was fabulous baby, and not too many would understand the "Zorro", so you...have touched on a multitude of inside thoughts that mean a lot to Your Man of Sand.

So beautiful, so expressive, so damn fucking erotic!

Your MOS aka SMF

In awe of your prose, the fluidity of which you write. The images, and metaphors are so genuine, and alive. This work of art is a painting you drew with words. Thank you for sharing your intimate soul. ~ :) Rain

Of passion etched in black and white

Exploding in fiery cleansing color

I need a cigarette

and I don't smoke

This promises to be a long day, so I read this to send me off. Now I'm tempted to call in sick! Patricia