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SweetVAabout 19 years agoHere's to the bittersweetness of...
...pink balloons. May they remind us to treasure what we have. Thanks, Bel. VA
Anonymousabout 19 years agoWonderful
images you create with this poem, Bel. I love the bittersweet tale it tells...
~Honey
RebeccaLeahabout 19 years agoI like
...the parrallel you drew. Very fitting in a way I've never thought of before now.
Reltneabout 19 years agopins & needles
I gave up after the evil clown burst the third one in a row, and settled for the cotton candy. :(
Anonymousabout 19 years ago"...In love we are all children."
beautiful. simple adaptations of feelings, eloquently put.
Well, done, handsome!
sackabout 19 years agowhich is why, whenever children are concerned.....
I always buy 2-3 balloons...they don't last!
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