All Comments on 'pip gets lost'

I liked the off beat phrasing here, it fit the feeling perfectly. I also enjoyed the "stage directions" (the pause and pause again)... reminded me of Vachel Lindsay. Excellent poems.

jim :)

are generally the unmet ones, but love is real and sometimes

the good things that happen in the tiniest increments are best. Wot larks, Pip. :)

this just feels so sad...I think I know pip from another life