All Comments on 'Plummeting'

soaring and then plummeting into a lover. The elipsis (...) were a little distracting and I wondered if you were using them for positioning or intended to use them in all the places you did. Regardless, this poem worked well.

jim : )

Thanks dear...you moved me with your words.

it is good to see that hope and love truly spring eternal

with hope "the waffle"

Use of language and metaphore is all, thank you for such a powerful work...

you have such beautiful poetry sweetheart. I love it.

Love Good poetry, felt very moved, will you be writing more poems, let me know if ya will or I'll chk back from time to time. Keep up the good work, and Thank you :)

:-)

and while going down the flame does get higher and hotter. Hells Bells a falling, TK U MLJ LV NV