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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
poetry shaves her pussy

alright alright you convinced me

you may fuck and suck with any luck

take nipple between teeth, spikes digging into back

back arching for depth and press-

moaning,

"it is not you, it is you"

taking on the fantasies fantasy.

love always my devilish little snookems,

~Madame Poetry

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
At first appearance

she may appear a bitch. But after getting to know her I've found her to be a demanding, and at times very rewarding mistress.

Perhaps you're not using the right words when you approach her?

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepover 19 years ago
Neat.

I like that you sound like you want to rape poetry, but can't quite seem to get up the sack to do it. Nicely done.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 19 years ago
a writing...

that explains how hard it is to make it in the poetry world tormenting the hell out of you when wanting a piece of the action and not getting it. i think it leaves any writer on the verge to take the clothes off poetry with an expression of utter rage. at least that is my thoughts. nice piece.

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