All Comments on 'Poet's Creed'

This is a really good challenge response. Your last verse says it all, jazziness, happiness and sex for all believers. One only hopes that your poet's heaven could be even more delightful.

Original, fresh, different. One thing I look for in a poem.

in a church where JB sung the hymns and Ms. Nin read scripture. Nice poem, SB.

When will you be taking new members? :)

Obviously, I missed this yesterday. It was worth discovering today :) I appreciate your acceptance and can only hope that someday, the world won't be so harsh, but it has to begin with the little ones. They mimic what they see, repeat what they are taught.

"Teach...your children well...."

It made me want to have a big ol' revival. This may be my favorite piece of yours so far. You're really at your best when you're waving your fist in the air about something, y'know?

I don't know how I missed this before. This is very well done. Thanks for the read.