All Comments on 'Post Nietzsche Refugees'

drips down through this one. It's apocalypse-lite, appealing to alienation and the ironic impulse so perfectly. excellent work.

What in the hell are you talking about? I keep trying to tie this in with Nietzsche.

This line has me confused

"trust for television"

It's a great line as are most in not all of the others.

God is dead

let's look for him again?

Is this it? The message is a little confusing for the title.

Still very well put, would like to see a clearer tie in, with the title

this is one of the best things you've done.

It's got power.

I loved this work, artful, robust and pointed. I felt sadness in this work for the state of our society, lost victims to the smallness of minds fettered to the trust of television...many wonderful lines here with some much to say. I love a poem that makes one think on so many levels.. and you do this brillantly. Thank you for the read and the exercise of my gray matter!

Du Lac~

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

Thanks for the journey~

My cerebral cortex as well as My conscience. You made many statements in this one work that placed alot on My food for thought plate tonight. Excellent write.

Vixxx

My cerebral cortex as well as My conscience. You made many statements in this one work that placed alot on My food for thought plate tonight. Excellent write.

Vixxx

Thought-provoking and well-written throughout, but this bit hits me harder than the rest:

"Because home is no more

than reassurance in the mind of man"

So well done.