by Liar
My comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.
....any immigrant can relate to, the wistfull memories of "The Old Country" mixed with the hope for a new and better life. I have lived this poem in my way, simply lovely.
:Note: I am not using the thermometer any more.
stuff here.
~Papi reads
because he can,
turns paper thin truths
in paper dry hands.~
That's a poem all by itself.
great job
makes a person think liar. i enjoyed this, like most of your stuff!
is the one families pass down, generation after generation. This poem has a fragile and wonderful feel to it. Great work, Liar