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Oxy this is an interesting read. To my eye/ear it seems like you wrote a fuller verse and then went back to it with your grammar's paring knife, peeling and slicing till only cubes of pure fleshed poesy are left. Fill in the corings readers with your own herbs and spices. >?)))><

in this poem reminds me, takes me back to summers hanging out at the Griggs' stables, they had racking horses and Tennessee walkers-- almost impossible to enjoy the ride, but the wash was something very special, they appreciate a bath almost as much as food, such graceful intelligent creatures they are :)