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by tungtied2u

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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 16 years ago
I loved..

the thought provoking scene you

paint with your words. We are exactly

what we are, rather we are a glinty

diamond, or a lump of ashen coal, it is

no different when inside every heart

beats the same, all in wonder, all in hope.

ALot of self reflection, but I do think..

You do "shine",just in ways you cannot see

as clearly as we do.

sGp

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
That last stanza ... nice !!

You always share so much with us in your writes. Another little piece of the puzzle that is Tung ... I loved this poem when you posted it on the thread and after rereading it, I find myself wanting to reach out and hug you till no breathe is left. Very sweet write that has such sorrow. Thank You ... for sharing your wonderful gift of poetry with us.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Sent out into the world with certainty and pride; living with anguished uncertainty. Life's stages can be so unsettling at times.

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