All Comments on 'Protrude'

Hot and erotic, this is the right site for such tantalizing poetic literature. Watch out for the one who tells you to change it or your grammars wrong or its not a poem. I thought it was great. Nice poem N~

A fast reading erotic work.

Like your other poems of the day

this one would be easier to enjoy

if it were organized into stanzas.

Please keep reading and writing.

edit:

"passions" should be possessive