by Du Lac
With the emphasis on living in the present. I will treasure this poem!
I think it was one of your poems I recently commented on and said that you did well with the rhyme in that poem. But with this poem, I'd love to see it as free verse. I think it could possibly be an improvement.
wow Du this one's awesome
rain ?
very well written
clever and curious
vague in the greatest since!
excellent poem~
Very nice, Miss Du Loc. I could feel the mist on my face.
One thing, tho. "go with the flow"? That was a jarring bit of un-originality. The risk we run when we rhyme.