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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Nice

thoughts. But you need to trim and edit bits to make this poem shine. It could be glorious. Write on!

~Syn

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
colorful poem

very nice images, touching poetry

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