by Debbie
So nice to see a posting from Debbie, who writes fluid, songlike poems. This one, with its refrain and tight construction seems lyric-like to me--it needs an accompanying melody. :-)
...and warm inside. It really is a nice poem with that feel good quality of great lyrics.
and the way I used to feel about her, too bad I found out it was all a crock of shit.
Good poem anyway.