All Comments on 'Raisin Bread'

i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the poetry forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating here is so that it does not affect any following temp ratings. - wildsweetone

really big.

Write on Box!

Very funny and amusing poem. Made me giggle.

this joke a while back in my email

This was a really funny poem. I hope you write more like it. I have seen the joke before too but it's better as a poem.