All Comments on 'Ramblings of the Broken Hearted'

by Lady Jayne

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 17 years ago
Very ...

emotional read here. I see your heart pouring out the tears of grand passion. Your wording is crystal clear with no cloud in sight. Have faith my friend ...

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
True, now it’s tough, yet…

The pain itself though was not rambling,

It came from your heart, loud and naked and clear.

It's a cliché they can say, but time which now seems to be like your foe number one, will be on your side once again!

Yea, I know... with time!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A piece sure to resonate with

All who have once loved

And lost and

Lived the pain...

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