All Comments on 'Raw Passion'

It works in all its passionate rawness. You deliver on what your title suggests, and I'll be damned if this poem doesn't actually flow rather flawlessly in all of its raw honesty from the first moist suggestion to the final calm after the storm. <br><br>

So few women seem willing to use the word "cunt" and your use of it is perfectly congruous with its context in this poem. I think this poem is a riot. One of the few "erotic" poems I've seen that actually succeeds at being erotic.