All Comments on 'read me'

to love about this poem, in my opinion, just the alliteration is worth the time to read it over and over

I especially liked this part--

burning writhing

deep within

a pupil plunge

tasty to the tongue when read aloud :)

But I must add

word wanker

prancing perverted

over my selling smile

That alone makes this a poem well worth reading. The more you write, the more impressed with you I become.

- Mindy