- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Reading poetry as masochism
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Words
like razors
slice her heart
Blood
like letters
write her story
Pain
like blood
fills her senses
- COMMENTS
todski28over 10 years agoif you make the first stanza last
So it reads
Blood
like letters
write her story
Pain
like blood
fills her senses
Words
like razors
slice her heart
Then you are left with a sliced heart as your final visual and with the blood letters writing her story it creates lineation i.e you are writing the story for the reader :-)
just my thoughts lesse,
press on I love your work
Ashesh9over 10 years agoLike razors
Slice her heart ......
This was the best stanza , Lesse , this works but then it goes downhill , at least for me : 5-ed !
Oldbear63over 10 years agoI just realized that reading some of this poetry is a form of masochism for me!
