by Jhenn
use of the senses in your imagery here; esp in the first stanza
'Lying here with you,
Listening to the moon,
Tasting the wind,
Hearing the clouds whisper of us'
Thanks for the read. Your poem has been mentioned in today's new poem reviews.
Lying here with you,
Listening to the moon,
Tasting the wind,
Hearing the clouds whisper of us
a great start~
Well done with contrasts between the poem's romantic start and the stark conclusion.