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by Jhenn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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Nice write enjoyed the read

Thanks for sharing

TT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good

use of the senses in your imagery here; esp in the first stanza

'Lying here with you,

Listening to the moon,

Tasting the wind,

Hearing the clouds whisper of us'

Thanks for the read. Your poem has been mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
nice write

Lying here with you,

Listening to the moon,

Tasting the wind,

Hearing the clouds whisper of us

a great start~

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Well done with contrasts between the poem's romantic start and the stark conclusion.

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