All Comments on 'Remembrance'

Always a pleasure to read what people do with this form. Yours works very well and has some lovely images. I think the syllable count is off in a few lines (doesn't detract from the poem, but thought I'd point it out in case it matters to you). I also think punctuation would help the reader move through the poem, but that's also a smallish point. I really enjoyed the read. Thank you.

Flows so nicely and smoothly, yet when I got to the end I felt like you left me dangling.